I think that my post in The Choice (the first) it shows my voice the best. In my post I say "So I can see why an author would write a romance in third person but I personally prefer when a character is the author". When I used words like "I prefer" and "personally" it shows voice. As a writer is shows that I would write a romance in the characters point of view. I also say "When a character narrates I feel closer to them and I enjoy the book more". This also shows why I would write a romance in the characters voice because it personally makes me feel closer to the characters.
In my post I use a mixture of low/informal and elevated/formal diction. I write "discussed...likability" which is elevated diction. I also write "feel bad" which is low diction. There isn't much syntax in my post. There isn't any strange punctuation and the sentence structure and length is all the same and they are medium length.
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